Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is a quite controversial topic what environmental problems are needed more attention and many people believe that the animal

extinction

should be the main focus of today environmental protection agenda, while others support the view that there are more serious problems exist.

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another opinion will be presented.

First

of all, it should be admitted that nowadays the world faces many tremendous environmental issues from the climate change and widespread pollution to deforestation and animal

extinction

that have

enourmous

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influence on the economic and social life of current and future generations. In

this

context, it is highly important to understand what problems are more urgent and require immediate actions, and the loss of some species of plants and animals is one these problems that cannot be postponed. It is obvious that many life species on Earth that have gone cannot be reproduced, so it is the most important problem to preserve the natural creatures that can disappear one day.

On the other hand

, animal

extinction

is the consequence of numerous other environmental problems, so it seems to be more sequential to solve the causes

first

.

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land for farming in Brazil causes the great pace of deforestation in Amazon rainforest, the ecosystem that consists of many unique species of plants and animals.

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urrent imperfect system of the waste management in many developing countries is the reason of

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plenty of environmental problems, so it is more important and relevant to solve other issues that cause the loss of plants and animals. In my opinion, almost all environmental problems the modern society face are deeply interconnected, that creates the necessity to make simultaneous and coherent actions to solve them.

Moreover

, I am convinced that focusing on one issue could aggravate many others and it will

finally

come to a

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strategy.

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the society and each country in

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not have enough resources to gradually and simultaneously solve all environmental problems, so I think the degree of reversal of problem should be taken into account to determine how urgent it is.

Similarly

, the

extinction

of plants and animals cannot be reversed at all, so it is the most significant environmental problem. In conclusion, it is less argued now that any steps towards

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olution should be taken and many countries come to an agreement that postponing of environmental problems will make them even worse. Considering the fact that resources are limited,

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to focus on more important issues and the loss of plants and animals is definitely the most of them.