It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people recommend that primary training in the digital technology age, students already have to study new skills
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, they might have to face a dilemma of cutting other subjects’ time or extending the school
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must have a system of transportation to a network of farms to make sure the students are safe. Finally
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field because though many peasants having knowledge about growing vegetables and raising stocks, they do not have teaching skills to work with students.
However
, I totally believe that all these changes for this
new subject
, farming is worth doing. Today children are so attached to gadgets that they need to be taught to reconnect to nature. When today children grow up, they are surrounded by advanced technology; the community is so busy thinking how to have children keeping up with the constant
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of computers and AI and sometimes forget to teach them about connecting to the real world. Teaching children about nature now is of utmost Correct your spelling
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because it might save generations from digital addictions. Correct your spelling
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Moreover
, I believe that farming could be an approach to intergrated
teaching. A farm could be an authentic environment for students to learn biology and nutrition and while practice farming, students already do parts of their PE Correct your spelling
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In conclusion, though having farming education
in primary school
requires a lot of work, it is really beneficial for students and should be implemented in the near future.Submitted by Andy on
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