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It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some people recommend that primary
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 gardening and farming. In my opinion, though adding farming into
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ational curriculum would with lots of work, it is worthwhile because children now are losing their connection to nature. Providing primary students with courses on growing vegetables and animals do have some drawbacks. To make room for farming
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, ministry of
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, schools and teachers have to make numerous modifications to the curriculum and invest in new
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 and teachers’ training.
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, they might have to face a dilemma of cutting other subjects’ time or extending the
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in the digital technology age, students already have to study new skills
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chool in
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rban area do not have
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easy access to
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. If farming becomes a compulsory
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, each
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overnment will have to invest in training teachers in
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, farming is worth doing. Today children are so attached to gadgets that they need to be taught to reconnect to nature. When today children grow up, they are surrounded by advanced technology; the community is so busy thinking how to have children keeping up with the
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 of computers and AI and sometimes forget to teach them about connecting to the real world. Teaching children about nature now is of utmost
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 because it might save generations from digital addictions.
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adical way to learn traditional subjects
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 requires a lot of work, it is really beneficial for students and should be implemented in the near future.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable practices
  • cultural literacy
  • hands-on experience
  • nutritional awareness
  • curriculum integration
  • time management
  • resource allocation
  • school gardening projects
  • animal husbandry
  • ecosystem education
  • dietary habits
  • work ethic
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