Write a letter to your manager about your work from last year. Include What you did What you think you could improve A training request

Dear
Mr.
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Scott. As we have discussed, I was wondering about the job developed in Project C
last
year and trying to figure out how I can improve my task achievements
this
year. If my memory serves me well, I reckon that I had
managing
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all the infrastructure from the project
such
as
IT
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the IT
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System which was really challenged considering my lack of experience. In fact, I had just cared about clients that only spoke
english
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and were located in The United States. For
this
year, I would like to bring about some new ideas for my career. To start, I am intending to take a French course in order to attend our international clients from Europe, I believe that really worths;
therefore
, would be able to improve my numbers when it comes to new accounts since I would be able to communicate with consumers from Europe and other countries.
Thus
, I would like to know if our company could fund the expenses of
this
french course due to the possibility that it will help me to leverage my duties in order to deliver better services to potential new clients. Looking forward to hearing
it
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from you. Regards, Jim Halpert.
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