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In cities many people are living alone. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or a negative trend?

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In
this
 fast life,everyone needs their personal space to get relaxed. To be alone at apartments has numerous causes and it gives positive outcomes to individuals and
society
. The main reason behind being alone at home is to keep privacy and being independent. Majority of the people today do not like to share their personal life with anyone as they do not want anyone judges them from their personal perspective and to hide the weaker side from the
society
.
Secondly
, to live alone give them
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ense of freedom form the taking care of the other to whom they live with and feel free from any kind of burden of the responsibilities that they have to do in the family and with
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artner.
Furthermore
, living by their self make them independent and more confident as well as responsible.
For instance
 when a person alone at home that teach them cooking and clean the house. These are the life long skills that enhance self-confidence.
Additionally
, to arranging payments for bills and other expenses make them responsible and give lessons to manage finance. Along with
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ruitful outcome for
society
.
For example
, when people prefer to live alone
then
 demand for housing can surge and fulfil
this
 requirement construction industry, general labour and many other fields of workers get will get employment. So it arises a number of opportunities for
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occupation
 that denotes for strong economic growth. To epilogue, as
this
 becomes a trend among the new generation to live alone but that give more fruit full results for individual and
society
.
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