Many societies has its homeless people some people think that the best way to help them is give them money. To what extent do you agree?

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present era, streets became home for many people and, the others believe that they can help homeless people by giving them money. I have a vehement view that it is having detrimental effects on the homeless.

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with, the

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has to provide a place to

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accommodation

for all citizens, especially, who are not able to care

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theirselves

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themselves

. If the society helps them

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of the

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, the authority will be

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ack of control of the social and economical balance.

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, in a

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, whether all needs can be handled without any help of the authority like the

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or

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municipality

, it makes the

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less powerful and useless. It is

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obvious

that in a territory where is administered

unsuccesfully

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unsuccessfully

, social conflicts will

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, law and other regulations will not be respected so, it causes chaos.

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, if the society helps homeless people economically on daily basis,

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of giving them

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ob, home and education opportunity, the other part of the society will be threatened by security flaw which brings increasing crime rate along. Because

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homeless people never have enough opportunity to live. They always will be in a search to be equal

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as other people.

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, robbery, shoplifting and other economical crimes go up and, homeless people believe that the determination of

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is nearly impossible and

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is

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huge advantage for them. To conclude,

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homeless people do not need cash for their daily needs, the

government

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should provide them

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equal opportunity to live.

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why I do not agree with

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idea.