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Immigration has a major impact on the society . what are the main reasons of immigration ? To what consequences can it lead to ?

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Nowadays, the vast majority of people choose to leave their home countries due to multiple reasons.
This
 trend will significantly affect contemporary society.
This
 essay will elaborate on the main causes of
this
 phenomenon and its dire consequences. On the one hand, it is completely true that a lot of individuals from
third
 world countries prone to migrate from their homelands aiming to live a better-off life.
In other words
; living in a prosperous nation implies living in a country with a stable economy.
For example
, according to statistical data that has been revealed recently, about 80% of Egyptian skilled workers immigrated to Canada because of the better employment chances and higher salaries.
Thus
, it is a common belief among people who live in impoverished countries that if they emigrated, they would have
better living
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 conditions.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that immigration has negative impacts on both immigrants and their country of destination.Unfortunately, a lot of refugees face a myriad of difficulties in the host country as they have to adapt to a different culture than their original one.
Moreover
, they have to learn a new language which might be extremely burdensome for them.
Therefore
, the leading authorities have to run various refugee assistance programs to help those people.
For instance
, In 2014, according to an article published in The New York Times, American government allocated a tremendous amount of money to assist immigrants at that time. In conclusion, In the light of what has been discussed, despite the fact that people immigrate to have better life prospects, life circumstances after immigration may not always meet people's expectations.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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