Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

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I think that people know the difference between useless and useful advertising product.

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, they pay attention to the things that interest them. Nowadays, some people believe that advertisement no longer has an impact on us, while others disagree.

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, companies are trying so hard to sell their products, that they overstate the true quality or exaggerate the functions of them.

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, some skincare products can have a good advertisement, but it can

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be harmful to some people's skin. Corporations are trying to talk someone into buying their goods even if they do not need them.

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, fewer people pay attention to them in the modern world.

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, advertisements may help you to improve your life or make it easier.

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, I saw an ad on the Internet one year ago about a very interesting and inexpensive vacation to Paris for three days. I and my family love travelling;

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, we did some research and looked more into it and made reservations.

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advertisement made my life happier and gave me wonderful memories. In conclusion, despite the fact that some advertisements are useful, people do not like the prevalent presence of them. We are becoming aware of how powerful they actually are and how we can handle them.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

217 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
misleading
desensitized

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