The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like new year or festivals. Do you agree or disagree?

Government spending and individuals

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often the

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of criticism in all over the world. Some people believe spending on celebrations is too much money. In my opinion, I disagree with

this

vision. Despite the huge amount of investment to make it happen, these events contribute to the economical

growth

and enforce the sense of

community

. Celebrations fuels

the

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economic

growth

. These events usually are created for thousands and even millions of people in order to they can attend and spend money. These

conmemorations

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commemorations

involve

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many services

aroud

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around

the event by employing people and contributing to

the

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economic

growth

.

For instance

, Sydney new year celebration

atracts

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attracts

millions of people from several countries.

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visitors pay for

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tickets, restaurants, hotels and many other services during their attendance.

Therefore

,

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ustralian economy is able to take the profit from that particular celebration regardless

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how much money they invested. On the other side, celebrations help to enforce

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ense of

community

.

As a result

, humans are social animals, the government efforts to

conmemorate

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commemorate

community

events

helps

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to increase the sense of to be part of a

community

.

Thus

, people are more engaged with the shared values of a particular group of people.

For example

, every year, Brazil invest millions of dollars to make an event to recall their ancient traditions. They dance and

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for an entire day. By doing

this

, people feel happier and the government spending

contribute

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to the meaning of life for many citizens. In conclusion, I disagree with the view of spending on celebrations is too much. From my point of view,

conmemorations

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commemorations

fuel the economic

growth

of a particular

community

and

also

help to promote the shared values of a

community

.