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Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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It is true that nowadays, cultural diversity is in progress, which means a huge number of countries become a residence for people from different cultures and ethnic community.
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 tendency is caused by plenty of reasons, and of course, it brings about lots of effect which can be considered as a positive development. Particularly, there are some of the reason justifying for
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 social phenomenon.
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, to some individuals, who have been living for a long period in an undeveloped nation, they would rather leave their own motherland to reside in
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 country. In some cases, they would decide to make a living and
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 settle down in that place.
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, there would be a colossal number of students want to gain more knowledge about culture, that
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 them decide to study abroad when they grow up, and after graduating, the government might provide them with a suitable job and accommodate them.
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, owing to the development of
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nternet as well as social media, people all around the world could be more well-informed with the progressive lifestyle in many countries, thanks to that reason, people are more and more into the migration to
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. The variety of different cultures and racial groups could positively impact on our life. In one hand,
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 many individuals living amongst the distinct foreigners, they can be more aware of various cultural traditions,
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, living abroad could create them an opportunity to learn a new language, becoming
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bilingual. In the global scales, the cultural and ethnic distinction could interlink people and harmonize them.
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 is exactly the component which
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 the economic aspect by the
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cooperation
 between a big number of companies as well as corporations. To sum up, I strongly approve of the cultural and ethnic integration not only because it provides us
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 huge knowledge about other cultures, but it is
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 considerable element for our life.
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