You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter • say how you heard about the plan • explain how you feel about it • ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is

Khadega

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Khadija

Amer and I have been living at AL AIN Tower since 2018. I am writing

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letter to enquire about the information that I have received about building a shopping

center

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centre

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in my

neighborhood

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area. One of my friends told me about the plans of the construction company as he is working for

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company as a civil engineer and he knows that my home address is near to the location of the new shopping mall. I was so excited once I heard about that news because it means that I do not have to drive for a long time to the city

center

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for shopping or running some errands.

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, I am concerned about the period of the development as my friend told me that his company is planning to finish

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mall in six years, which might make it more difficult for residentials to access their homes. I would like to know if the establishment of the shopping mall is going to adjust routes and accesses to my home because I am worried about getting late for my work.

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, has your council approved

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contract yet? I am looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully,

khadega.amer09Sat Nov 21 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

207 words

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