People under the age 18 who commit crimes should be re-educated rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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been always a debate about the optimal ways of correcting the behaviour of juvenile. Some would claim that juvenile should be punished for their crimes while others argue that they should

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guidelines

for correcting their wrongdoings .

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essay will discuss why I completely agree that teenagers would benefit largely from having a proper education than going to a

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jail

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ertain period in prison would have made younger children from repeating their crimes.

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punishment has often regarded by

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society as the best method to teach juvenile from their mistakes despite their younger age.

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, minors are more likely to miss their families when they get looked up in their cell, which made them to

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regret

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wrongful

actions.

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Furthermore

, it is often believed that minors need strictness methods to change their attitudes because if the society did not hold them accountable for their crimes , they would convey into criminals.

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, when 15 years old boy started to steal money from the people, he might

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ight with those people and

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harm them to run away from them.

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ail would be

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effective approach to show juvenile the right way to learn from their mistakes.

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, minors might learn better their lessons

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guiding them toward the

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straight

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instead

of sending them

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to jail.

Although

prison would intimidate them , it is not enough to suppress their desire from doing their old habits. Younger

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children

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appropriate courses that are special in undermining the

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harmful

actions and rectify their attitudes and behaviour. As result, they will understand deliberately their lessons and start to be more open for any change that can help them to get out of

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miserable life. According to

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Harvard

University, 70% of people under the age of 18 commit

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multiple

felonies

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previously

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rison. it can be seen that teaching

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minors is the most

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effective

route to protect them from doing the same

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. Despite the advantages of penalizing people whose age below 18 for their falts, it can be resolved friendly

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enforcing them to take classes for evaluating their actions.