Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are many subjects that students must

study

at school and

art

is one of them. There are some people

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elieve that

art

is essential for students, while

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others claim that it is

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. In my viewpoint, a totally agree that

art

is essential. There are some reasons for some people to say

art

is a

time

-wasting subject.

First

, they think that studying

art

is making a lack of

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for studying

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cientific subject

such

as chemistry, physics and so on. These scientific subjects need much

time

to

study

and do research. For

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nstant, students can use the

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drawing a picture to do some experiments in chemistry. Another reason is that some people think

art

does not make many values for

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society

. Some people think that achievements from scientific subjects bring

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society

many benefits and direct values, while achievements of

art

just bring people enjoyment and relaxation. People believe

art

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society

.

For example

, research for the Covid-19 vaccine are very valuable and they effectively impact on the

society

, while a painting just makes people enjoy and relax. People who believe

art

is essential

also

have their reasons.

First

, they think

art

helps students relax after lessons in hard subjects. Unlike the other subject,

art

does not have many

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formulas

and rules;

therefore

, students do not feel overload when they

study

art

.

For example

, after studying math with many

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formulas

and brainstorming times, students can relax when they

study

a music lesson because they have a chance to sing or at least to listen to music. Another reason is that

art

helps students to create aesthetics.

In other words

,

art

helps students be aware of how beauty is. For

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nstant, a student can decorate his studying corner to make it more beautiful, a beautiful studying corner can inspire

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the student to

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. To conclude, the people who think studying

art

wastes

time

have their own reasons

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as

art

is making

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hortage of

time

for experiments or

art

makes indirect values.

However

, it is true to think that

art

is essential because relax from hard-working lessons and creating students’ aesthetics are really important.