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Band 5.5

You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. In your letter include: – what the event is – why the event is being held – what arrangements have already been made – how your friend can help

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Dear
Tairan
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Taiwan
, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to let you know that I along with my cousins are going to arrange an anniversary ceremony in a resort near to your village and asking you for some help. We are actually going to celebrate our 5th marriage anniversary in the countryside, where our extended family will be joining
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us.
This
 intimate relationship has brought lots of happiness in our lives, and
therefore
, we are trying to make
this
 day a memorable one. I already booked a resort named "Annanna" for three days located a bit far from
Gazipur
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 district to throw the party. The meals, spa and indoor games are included with the cost. As you are resident of that place It would be great if you could suggest some tourist spots near to our hotel and join us to visit these. As we will be stayed there for three days, visiting some attractive places will enhance our enjoyment.
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, we required you to hire a local microbus for the 2nd day of our excursion for travelling. You are cordially invited with your family to our anniversary party. Please join us and make it memorable. Yours loving, Taslima
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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