some children find some particular School subject difficult for example math or philosophy so this subject should be optional rather than compulsory to what extent do you agree or disagree?

it cannot be denied that a
study
has become a part of individuals
life
that is
playing a crucial role in their task which they are doing on daily basis. a segment of society thinks that in the schools some
subject
should be optional rather than compulsory. I completely disagree with
this
statement I will delve my point in upcoming paragraphs before reaching the conclusion
To begin
with academic
education
play a vital role in children
life
. without
education
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individuals cannot survive in
this
contemporary era so all
subject
should be compulsory in the school for the children
education
. if children will not
study
in all
subject
then
they can not enhance their knowledge in
d
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ifferent area that will help them in their future
life
to get the jobs.
for instance
, sometimes children feel difficulties in Maths
subject
and others.they try to change the
subject
rather than hard work on that .
this
thing will put a bad effect on their entire
life
not only
this
they will always find optional things in whole
life
that will not be possible.
Moreover
, in
this
modern era,everyone wants to be rich ,
that is
only possible by the higher
study
and knowledge. with the help of vast knowledge
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person can become multi-talented in the company and get higher salary with that salary person can enjoy the
life
and fulfil the all needs and desires
also
.and
i
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ndividual can spend their whole
life
comfortably.
thus
all
subject
should be compulsory
that is
important for the children. In conclusion, in these days
study
and job competition is the higher optional
subject
cannot become multitasking the person so in academic
education
all compulsory subjects should be taught that would be good for the student future
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