Experience is a key factor fro becoming successful. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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xperience is a key factor for becoming successful. I would like to briefly describe the pros and cons of having relevant
experience
especially in the corporate industry and
then
, I would conclude by agreeing or disagreeing to it. We live in a
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world and in almost every interview, one of the questions asked is, how many years of
experience
do you possess?
This
is where
experience
comes in handy and you have a fantastic chance of being offered the
job
and in most cases, candidates who have a rich amount of
experience
are selected.
This
would
also
depend on their qualification and the skills required to match the
job
role. You might be wondering, what about the ones who do not have any
experience
, will they ever find a
job
? Well, they will find a
job
but it will take a little extra time in order for them to kick start their careers.
This
group mainly consists of students who have graduated and are waiting to enter the work kingdom. Even I have been part of
this
group.I still clearly remember applying through many
job
portals and
also
asking my friends, relatives and classmates for leads.
Initially
, nothing really worked out. The good news is, Universities and Colleges have started
this
great initiative of having an internship program.
This
helps the students to have a
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experience
of the industry. To conclude, I personally feel it is important to have a certain amount of
experience
and I am delighted that educational institutions have understood the importance and have created a platform for students to be able to intern and gain the
experience
.
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