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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Since many ages have passed, "Health is wealth" is one of the greatest sayings. In
this
 modern era, every
country
 faces its own challenges. Some people believe that every
country
 should have a free
healthcare
service
 while on the coincide, some people believe they are too expensive. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both sides. The future of a nation is in the hands of the people. If people are healthy
then
 a
country
 will grow more. People's taxes run a
country
 and some feel that
healthcare
service
 should be free because if people will live healthily and happily. They will be able happier to pay taxes. To illustrate
this
, Canada has free
healthcare
service
 and it is ranked as one of the happiest countries in the world. On the contrast side, some people believe that
healthcare
service
 should not be free because it adds a chunk amount of taxes on all the people and it becomes more expensive for countries to run. If a
country
 will be spending a lot of money on its people
then
 how a
country
 will grow in terms of the global ranking. To exemplify, America is the greatest nation in the world and it does not have free
healthcare
service
.
Instead
 of spending money on its
healthcare
,it spends money on the defence system and army. To nullify
this
, it is
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esponsibility of the government to take care of its people. The should be a minimum fee for any treatment but people should not be going in debt as well for
healthcare
 services. In the end, people are paying taxes and the best to invest taxes it to invest in people.
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