You are living overseas and have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor. Explaining what the incorrect information is say how the editor could change it Suggest another topic about your country that they could write about

Dear
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Michael Scott The reason that I am writing is
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the fact that
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magazine called Living Abroad has recently published an important report about South America;
however
, there is a
misinformartion
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misinformation
in the content which I would be glad to point out. To be precise, on
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page 15 of
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July edition there is
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square
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where it is mentioned that "all countries in South America" speak Spanish. As a
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, I would
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inform you that in brazil we definitely speak
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instead
. I am sure that it was just a mistake;
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I do believe that you could fix it in the
next
edition. If I may suggest, it would be necessary to input a
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explaining that there was a silly mistake in the latest edition which could lead readers to some misinformation. Considering the core of the magazine that it is travellers around the world
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if you show
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apologizes
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people will surely understand and feel glad that they will not be expected to speak
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when they come to brazil.
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, as brazil is really
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to the content from your magazine it would be really delightful if it was made a report showing the
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numbers when it comes to
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tourism
and how
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are proud to receive foreigners from all around the world.
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your readers would appreciate
this
help when choosing their
next
trip. Looking
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forward
to hearing from you. Yours sincerely. Jim
Halppert
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