You are living overseas and have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor. Explaining what the incorrect information is say how the editor could change it Suggest another topic about your country that they could write about
Dear July edition there is
Mr.
Michael Scott
The reason that I am writing is Change the punctuation
Mr
due
the fact that Add the preposition
todue
you
magazine called Living Abroad has recently published an important report about South America; Change the pronoun
your
however
, there is a misinformartion
in the content which I would be glad to point out.
To be precise, on Correct your spelling
misinformation
the
page 15 ofRemove the article
apply
Correct article usage
the
as
Correct your spelling
a
square
where it is mentioned that "all countries in South America" speak Spanish. As a Add an article
the square
brazilian
, I would Change the capitalization
Brazilian
like
inform you that in brazil we definitely speak Add the particle
tolike
portuguese
Change the capitalization
Portuguese
instead
. I am sure that it was just a mistake; therefore
I do believe that you could fix it in the next
edition.
If I may suggest, it would be necessary to input a foot note
explaining that there was a silly mistake in the latest edition which could lead readers to some misinformation. Considering the core of the magazine that it is travellers around the worldCorrect your spelling
footnote
,
if you show Remove the comma
apply
your
Correct the word
yours
apologizes
people will surely understand and feel glad that they will not be expected to speak Replace the word
apologies
spanish
when they come to brazil.
Change the capitalization
Spanish
In addition
, as brazil is really conected
to the content from your magazine it would be really delightful if it was made a report showing the Correct your spelling
connected
brazilian
numbers when it comes to Change the capitalization
Brazilian
turism
and how Correct your spelling
tourism
brazilian
are proud to receive foreigners from all around the world. Change the capitalization
Brazilian
Certainly
your readers would appreciate Add a comma
,Certainly
this
help when choosing their next
trip.
Looking foward
to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely.
Jim Correct your spelling
forward
Halppert
Correct your spelling
Halpert
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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