You are living overseas and have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor. Explaining what the incorrect information is say how the editor could change it Suggest another topic about your country that they could write about

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Michael Scott The reason that I am writing is

due

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the fact that

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magazine called Living Abroad has recently published an important report about South America;

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, there is a

misinformartion

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misinformation

in the content which I would be glad to point out. To be precise, on

the

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page 15 of

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July edition there is

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square

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where it is mentioned that "all countries in South America" speak Spanish. As a

brazilian

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, I would

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inform you that in brazil we definitely speak

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instead

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. I am sure that it was just a mistake;

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I do believe that you could fix it in the

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edition. If I may suggest, it would be necessary to input a

foot note

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explaining that there was a silly mistake in the latest edition which could lead readers to some misinformation. Considering the core of the magazine that it is travellers around the world

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if you show

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apologizes

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people will surely understand and feel glad that they will not be expected to speak

spanish

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when they come to brazil.

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, as brazil is really

conected

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to the content from your magazine it would be really delightful if it was made a report showing the

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numbers when it comes to

turism

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tourism

and how

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are proud to receive foreigners from all around the world.

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your readers would appreciate

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help when choosing their

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trip. Looking

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forward

to hearing from you. Yours sincerely. Jim

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Halpert

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

247 words

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