Some believe the primary purpose of museums is to entertain people, while others believe their purpose is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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the museums has been the hobby of so many people in the modern world.

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and

tourist

parks have played an important

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in the lives of so many foreigners and visiting those sites

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now become a growing trend for

tourist

. The sole purpose of visiting the museums by many has been the topic of discussion. The argument that some visit the

museum

for

entertainment

and others believes it is for education remains debatable. The essay will analyze

this

argument before declaring a position.

Firstly

, when it comes to

entertainment

museum

plays an important

role

in entertaining

tourist

, the primary reason of

tourist

visiting a place is for memories and the

museum

gives the best and lasting memories whether in pictures or videos.

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, many countries are now developing their Museums and Monuments because it plays a major

role

in their Culture and

Entertainment

program. Some

tourist

would rather choose to be entertained in

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useum by so doing they are spending and creating memories,

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whether

this

proves true remain debatable. History and

museum

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hand in hand, while others

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that visiting

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useum is for

entertainment

other believes

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primary

role

is for education. Museums act as an avenue of educating young children, adults and

tourist

about the heritage of the state or country they reside during a travel tour or field trip.

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, many students tend to turn up when they know they will be visiting their

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museums and see monuments of Heroes

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they look up too and

this

gives them a good sense about the history. It has been recorded that every year children visit the white house

museum

solely for educational purposes. In summary, both sides of the argument regarding if the primary purpose of

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useum is for Education have strong support.

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many people visit

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useum has a hobby, primarily for

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and for great shows.

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serves as a

get away

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from stress at work, museums

also

serves as

a relaxation centers

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for

tourist

and for those who want to engage in meaningful discussions. It is

therefore

clear that the primary purpose of

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useum is for

entertainment

.