Some believe the primary purpose of museums is to entertain people, while others believe their purpose is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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the museums has been the hobby of so many people in the modern world.

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and

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parks have played an important

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in the lives of so many foreigners and visiting those sites

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now become a growing trend for

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. The sole purpose of visiting the museums by many has been the topic of discussion. The argument that some visit the

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for

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and others believes it is for education remains debatable. The essay will analyze

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argument before declaring a position.

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, when it comes to

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plays an important

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in entertaining

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, the primary reason of

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visiting a place is for memories and the

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gives the best and lasting memories whether in pictures or videos.

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, many countries are now developing their Museums and Monuments because it plays a major

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in their Culture and

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program. Some

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would rather choose to be entertained in

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useum by so doing they are spending and creating memories,

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whether

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proves true remain debatable. History and

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goes

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hand in hand, while others

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that visiting

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useum is for

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other believes

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primary

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is for education. Museums act as an avenue of educating young children, adults and

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about the heritage of the state or country they reside during a travel tour or field trip.

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, many students tend to turn up when they know they will be visiting their

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museums and see monuments of Heroes

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they look up too and

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gives them a good sense about the history. It has been recorded that every year children visit the white house

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solely for educational purposes. In summary, both sides of the argument regarding if the primary purpose of

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useum is for Education have strong support.

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many people visit

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useum has a hobby, primarily for

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and for great shows.

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serves as a

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from stress at work, museums

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serves as

a relaxation centers

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for

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and for those who want to engage in meaningful discussions. It is

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clear that the primary purpose of

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useum is for

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.