Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Arts's investments have sparked a bigger concern among communities, many people think that the

nation

's funds should be spent in other departments related to public concerns

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Health or Environment. In my view, I disagree with

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point because when nations invest in painting and music and

also

invest in culture and

history

. Arts

enrichs

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enrich

enriches

people and cities in different aspects bringing more tourists which means more funds to the

nation

's budget. It is true that many countries are facing

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urgent problems

such

as famine, climate change, and pandemic across the world.

Hence

, these scenarios avoid countries to invest in Arts.

However

, the damage of lack of artistic works is extremely harmful

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the current society and

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ext generations.

First

of all, arts is the

most pure

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expression of human being and can be illustrated in different performances

such

as poetry, music, and painting.

In other words

,

arts

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expressions allow human to connect with their emotions and reflected them to others which

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essential in order to find peace and

self- development

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.

Moreover

, Arts is the illustration of

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ation's

history

, it is the representation of roots, beliefs, and traditions. All of these points are merits for the new generation in order to maintain traditions and

also

learn about their ancestors. A country without

history

is only a

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company.

Besides

, the contribution of arts to the

nation

's funds is gaining a lot of power. Indeed, in Berlin, popular music festivals carry many people from overseas who spend

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argest amount of money in souvenirs, accommodation, tours, and facilities. These concerts contribute billion dollars to the council and

also

bring jobs for many citizens. Another example is the case of Italy, Italians are always be concerned to preserve and foster its arts values. Churches, sculptures,and museums are essential in the Italian's because they know the power of

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attraction

to deliver tourist.

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the craze of arts can allow the collection of funds which can be used in public services. In conclusion, I think that it is not necessary chose to invest in arts or in public services, I strongly believe that is essential for any

nation

because it is the only representation of human

history

,

moreover

, brings many benefits to the knowledge of young people. In

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addition

, Arts is the best manner to increase the

nation

's budget.