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Some people believe that smart phones are destroying social interaction today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people hold the belief that currently, mobile devices affect negatively on social communications. From my point of view,
this
 great invention in the 21st century harms live communication between people,
however
, its positive aspects to the interaction are undeniable.
To begin
 with, some people claim that
smart phones
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 reduced the level of communication between people because mobile phones have become
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part of our day and many people pay too much attention to their
smartphones
. Having said that, there are many attractive applications or entertainment games that influent people to spend a great amount of time
,
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 while reducing their time for socializing.
For instance
, many video games are demanding a huge number of hours and children playing these games are being unable to socialize with their friends.
On the other hand
,
smartphones
also
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pportunity for people to socialize with those who are not near which is the biggest invention for humanity.
Thus
, there are many huge companies
such
 as Viber, Whatsapp or Zoom that give people a chance to communicate or socialize with their relatives or friends who are in the countryside or abroad.
For example
, my grandparents live abroad and using the Viber application we chat with them either by video call or by voice call and
this
 application have made an opportunity to keep in touch with them. To sum up, it is worth mentioning, that
smartphones
 may have a negative impact on people by reducing social interaction in our days,
nevertheless
, at the same time giving
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pportunity to people to interact with people who do not live near and I think that
smartphones
 partly destroy social interaction nowadays.
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