In what ways are you privileged? Why is it important to think about your position of privilege? What are the effects of considering privilege in daily life?

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Everyone is privileged in several ways as we are born in a society filling with inequalities and judgements. As a student, my

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is to engage in studying and learning technical skills and knowledge at schools.

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privileged to receive love from my parents and sibling as the youngest child. The

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of an individual is given based on his identity and social rank, while one's behaviours and mindset can reflect their identity in the community.

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, it is vital to think about one's position of

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. In terms of the effects of considering

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in daily life,

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provides more opportunities for people with higher social rank.

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, a student who is born in a rich family is more likely to receive an opportunity to study abroad.

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, an individual with better

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has higher self-confidence compared to those who are less privileged.

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is because the public often discriminates against the underprivileged, resulting in a lack of courage for them to try new things.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

173 words

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In what ways are you privileged? Why is it important to think about your position of privilege? What are the effects of considering privilege in daily life?

Include an introduction and conclusion

There are some child wo have certain talents like, sports, arts etc. with born while other don't. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.

Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world today. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is replacing fossil fuels. Is this a positive or negative development?

Many graduates want to start their first job in a big corporation. Many others prefer to work for a small company first. What are the different advantages in each decision?