too much money is spent by individuals and governments on making themself and the areas they live in look beautifull. This is wasteful and it has no useful purpose. Instead, the money should be spent on improving individuals' health. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Over the

last

few decades, eating healthy has become increasingly popular around

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the world. For many people, especially elderly and adult one, the chance to avoid

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diseases

or get a better high quality of life.

Nevertheless

, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do

this

. In

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essay, I will discuss some reasons why

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should be spent on people's health rather than investing

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the areas where they live. Let us begin by looking at the advantages of eating well. One of the main positive of buying a good

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quality

of food is that it enhances your body. What I mean by

this

is that the life

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expectancy

is going to be longer as well sedentarism and

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obesity

may be avoided.

This

can make you shrink the

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likelihood

of dying earlier.

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, spending

money

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in order to a better well being. Take elderly people

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for example

, thousand of them

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attend

almost daily to these places for a range of

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purpose

purposes

such

as swimming, to do yoga or generally doing working out.

In addition

, people may make new friends or it may be useful to find a partner. Turning to the other side of the argument, investing

money

on the areas when they tend to live may have advantages. To exemplify, there are several places which have been become famous because of their

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demodulation

as The Red Stairs in Brazil-Rio Janeiro which were designed by the neighbourhood. All things considered,

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ntake of healthy and organic food could not be affordable. You need to weigh up the pros of spending

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,

nonetheless

, becoming areas where they live interesting could bring extra income to the local community. Personally, I believe the

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benefits

in terms of improving our health eventually

outweight

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outweigh

any negatives.