Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is often said that forming children to become a good citizen is the responsibility of parents.

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, some people argue that children can learn how to be a better individual in t

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ociety at

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. In my opinion,

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both could teach them how they should not turn into a bad person, I believe parents play a more important role in g

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their children. P

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role is necessary i

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teaching children to be good members of society.

First

, they are the one whom sons and daughters spend most of their time with. As the result, parents can easily affect their children in the way they behave since they show the sign of respect to the adults and listen to the words older people say.

In particular

, parents can recognise the bad behaviour of the children and later on, they could ask their child to change it in an early stage.

Second

, because of spending a long period of time with their parents, children might form a habit of imitating the o

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actions and behaviours.

Thus

, parents, who are good citizens, can be a good image for the young.

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hool might be a suitable place for children to learn

this

.

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of all,

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public space is where rules and obligations are placed. As a consequence, children are forced to follow the rules and learn the laws by heart in order not to get any troubles.

Furthermore

, a number of factors surrounding the children at

school

might affect them in a good way.

This

includes friends, teachers whom they meet daily, and lessons they learn.

For example

, teachers can use several teaching methods in c

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assroom to form a

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ood behaviour of the children,

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as respecting older people, or standing in line while they are waiting. In conclusion, while I understand the importance of

school

in forming good people for t

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ociety, I think that e

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ucational environment should focus on teaching academically to help the children have enough knowledge for future need.