In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a known fact that in many poor nations

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rates have been rising rapidly for the past few years. As criminality escalates, people find themselves in a difficult position where they need to work to survive but are scared to leave their homes because of the possibility of being robbed. In

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I intend to demonstrate the reasons for the existence of

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an alarming number of crimes as well as the suggestions that could help diminish

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problem.

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, it is important to state that

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usually occurs on deeply unequal societies. In fact, in poor countries people struggle to find low paying salary jobs because they need to survive while only an extremely small part of that nation’s population concentrates most of the national wealth. In Brazil,

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, a survey recently showed that 5% of the people

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90% of the countries’ GPI.

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, those nations’ governments do not invest

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infrastructure and basic living conditions

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as water and energy supply to their poor. In India,

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, many people have to wash their clothes as well as take their baths on rivers due

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the lack of plumbing and clean water at their homes. By those standards, it is comprehensible that people would turn to

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to try to diminish the harsh conditions in which they live

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. There are several measures that could be adopted in an attempt to ease social injustice and, as result, to help reduce

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rates.

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, two measures are simple enough for those countries to implement.

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, authorities should raise taxes to the richest and

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apply

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tax income to the benefit of the poor by building hospitals, schools and making sure quality water supply will be sufficient.

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, that way people would have better living conditions and jobs would be created

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reducing the need for the unemployed to turn to

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.

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, law enforcement should improve monitoring to ensure that

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will not only be punished but

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prevented from happening. After the adoption of

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steps,

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rates should drop. In conclusion, it is my opinion that criminality is caused by social injustice

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most poor locations.

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fable richness division is known to be a reality at those places, it is possible to mitigate the inequalities and to provide basic living conditions to people.

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aw exists to be followed and it has to be ensured by authorities.

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, I do believe that

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could be prevented if the previously mentioned measures would be

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in place.