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Some people think that the most important function of music is to help people relax. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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An overwhelming number of people consider that the essential feature of
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usic is to help humans get relaxation. I completely agree that
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 can benefit people calm because it can influence
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the combination of factors
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 as reduce the
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 of
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 hormone and pain reduction. One point why I agree that
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 a vital function of helping people get
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elax is that it encourages to decrease the
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 of
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 hormone. Many people noticed how different situations may influence
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their psychological
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 and it is not always happened in a good key. After a long productive day at university or at work, many people feel
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 and inability to overcome the following problems;
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, with the helping of
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, they understand the beneficial feature to reduce the
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 of
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. The best example that illustrates
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 issue is according to the latest researching of Harvard Medical School, scientists did the experiment on the people of 25-55 aged group, turned on the
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 and observed how
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 could influence on them. They concluded that if people could afford themselves to listen to classic
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during
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 20 minutes, the amount of
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 would be decreased by 40%. Another point why
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 an advantageous point for people is that it may reduce the pain.
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, when people experience pain,
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 can dull the harmful diseases and be distracted by something else, and
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, a person forgets that he had problems with the organism.
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roup of students from Omsk State University did
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research about people who usually feel the headache. They distributed people by the type of
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 they prefer. When they turned on the
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, they noticed that the
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 of blood pressure, pulse and heart rate went down, and as a consequence, the headache was gone. In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that the crucial function of
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 is to help people relax because it may help reduce the
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 of
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 and avoid problems with the organism.
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