You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: explain how you knew about the plans describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood suggest a possible solution to the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, The reason that I am writing

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regards to the construction of the airport at 145 George Street in downtown which has been concerning the neighbourhood. I have heard about

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new venture through tax drivers who work around the

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and usually transfer officials

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. In short, there are different drivers who were told by these officials from the government that the work has already started. It is my obligation as a taxpayer to caution that

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construction should immediately stop as there are some aspects

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that were not considered by the government so far.

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, there are dozens of schools around the

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which will certainly cause students distractions with

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departures where classes take place.

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, there are too many buildings around the

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which would trigger difficulties

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airplanes

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to land,

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, it would be just a matter of time until an accident happens. If I may suggest, it should be considered shifting out the airport to the countryside so as to avoid putting local citizens in danger.

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, in the countryside, there are no high-rise buildings or skyscrapers or local schools that could be an issue

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the aforementioned reasons.

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consider the reasons above and as a consequence change the construction plan to another

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. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely. Jim Halpert

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

236 words

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