The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These three pie charts

shows

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weekly

journals

read at an Australian university by all

students

, junior

lecturers

and

PhD

students

. Trends show different demographics reading varying amounts of

journals

Overall

PhD

students

journals

than all

students

and junior

lecturers

. When looking at the pie charts all demographics read at least one journal a

week

, with the upper end being beyond 12

journals

Majority

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The majority

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of all

students

read between one and five

journals

weekly;

this

majority constitutes 67%. Three-quarters of junior

lecturers

read between 6 and 11

journals

week

along with

four-fifths of

PhD

students

reading 12 or more

journals

While

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80% of

PhD

students

read greater than 12

journals

This

percentage is significantly higher when compared to junior

lecturers

and all

students

, at 24% and 12% respectively.

In contrast

, two-thirds

all

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of all

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students

read between one and five

journals

week

, followed by 5% of

PhD

students

with 1% of junior

lecturers

. Generally, an overwhelming majority of

PhD

students

read the most

journals

per

week

, with all

students

reading the least.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

173 words

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