Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say why parking will benefit all employees

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Dear Sir, I am writing to
infrom
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inform
you about some problems that we are encountering
for
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having no parking area in the
office
,
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and requesting you to take
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regarding
this
. The fact is, there is no parking in the building to park vehicles.
As a result
, we have to use public transport to reach into
workplace
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despite having private cars and bikes, which
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often
causes late
attandance
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attendance
.
Besides
, it is
also
inconvenient for many of us to get into and get down from public vehicles as these are crowded. Our
office
building covers a large area, and it has
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free space available
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the front side. I think,
this
land could be renovated to build a car park, where more than 100 vehicles could be accommodated. We are more than four hundred employees are working in
this
organization. Building
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parking will serve great advantages to the
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employees
as many of them can be able to travel to
office
driving their transport and feel safe at work keeping these in the official area.
Moreover
, it will reduce discomfort and late
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attendance
. I am requesting you to consider our problems and take
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initiatives
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to build a car stand at
office
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. Your's sincerely,
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