These days, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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are more polluted than before which causes lots of problems.The growth in the number of urban

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due to migration and

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in the industrial activities lead to

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overnment should take some steps to reduce

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opulation. There are several

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the amount of air pollution.

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duwellers

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have immigrated in order to meet a better quality of life

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as decent universities and up-to-date recreational facilities.

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growth in population increases

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in the number of vehicles and human activities.

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statistics show that one car will be used more in exchange for every 5 migrants.

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,the number of factories is increasing due to industrial evolution which is one of the primary

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of CO2 emission.

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activities,the problems with pollution are going to be worse than ever. To solve

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entioned problems

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overnment should encourage people to live in

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ountryside and some incentives to business owners to rebuild their firm out of cities.

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should reduce taxes in small cities in order to persuade urban residents to move to

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helpful for population distribution.Beside states can sale fields, located out of cities,with low prices so as to encourage factory owners to relocate sources of air pollution. To conclude,people and companies are the main reason for

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issue ,and unless the government take some steps,increased amount of contamination in air will cause lots of drawbacks.

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These days, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?