There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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ariety of

musics

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music

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have been developing around the nations. Both traditional and modern

music

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still becoming

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usic industry until now. In my opinion, both genres are important and have their own impact

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the community. The reasons why people need

music

will be described in

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essay.

First

of all,

music

is one of the sources of enjoyment which has been attracting people since the old days. The combination of the tones, sound of instruments and

rhytms

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rhythms

produces a pleasant sound to the heart and many people enjoy

this

sensation. Since the ancient generation until now people included

music

in any kind of events

such

as festival, birthday celebration and wedding ceremony. The

second

reason

music

is needed because it is used as

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important

part

in a

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ritual. As we can see in the churches, temples or even in a mosque,

music

is played as the compliment

part

of the pray.

Music

is believed as the

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catalyst

of the pray to reach

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Heaven faster. Comparing traditional

music

of a country and international

music

that is

heard by most of the folks recently is unfair. Traditional

music

And popular international

music

have their own

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and

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used for different purposes. Traditional

music

is

part

of the history and culture of its nation.

Moreover

, it usually plays in national

ocassions

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occasions

or an event where cultural things are introduced to the other nations. Meanwhile, global

music

is a genre which

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well known because most of the society like it and it does not relate to previous history or heritage of

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pecific country. It often plays in radio, television programs and social media platforms and becoming more famous because people keep plays it. Overall, in my opinion, in the future

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both genre will still be played by many people and they will keep

enjoy

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them.