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Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #sportsmen #sportswomen #misbehave #field
In a professional setting,
one
 must always be cordial with their fellow mates.
However
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in a situation wherein
one
 is competing against another like while playing sports, in the spur of the moment there can be
e
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xchange of unpleasant comments. I strongly disagree that sportsmen and women can get away and justify their action, as long as they perform.
To begin
 with, players from various sports as viewed as role-models. They have
an
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enormous fan
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followers who worship them. Every movement is documented and monitored by the press, if not posted on their social media handles. If they conduct in an inappropriate
manner
 during the game, it would reflect badly on their personal brand which in return would result
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a decline in their popularity.
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, a cricket player based out of India who is
one
 of the best
bowler
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,
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 was reported to have behaved in an unsuitable
manner
 in a public space. Strangers who were present at the location
,
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 tweeted and shared videos of the incident that led the fan base of the
cricket's
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 in shock.
Additionally
,
on
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on-field
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f
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ield
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it's natural to feel competitive and react in an unsuited
manner
. The pressure of performing creeps in, which leads to misbehaviour. If
this
 continues to happen, it will tarnish relationships with co-players in the long run. Even if any untoward exchange of words
take
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 place, the fellow player should apologise. In conclusion, I disagree that just because
one
 is skilful and talent, that doesn't give anyone the leeway to behave in an in misappropriate
manner
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • misbehave
  • professional sportsmen
  • role model
  • public figures
  • influence
  • performance
  • moral standards
  • media scrutiny
  • endorsements
  • personal brand
  • consistency
  • punishment
  • redemption
  • integrity
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