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Question: Many people decide on a career path early in their life and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

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Career choices are hard to manage. Some people argue that decide on a career path as early as possible and stay on it produce more
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satisfaction
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. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with them because a satisfying working
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 depends on many things which are not under control. In order to get
satisfaction
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 at
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, people need to
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 on their emotional intelligence and their workplace relationships. There are many events in our
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 that we are not able to manage and which could affect our future. Ever-evolving technologies and changes in society
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 to an unpredictable job market. If individuals are not constantly updating their skills, it does not matter that they make
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 right decision early in
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 events
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 as relationship changes, accidents or natural disasters could impact in future.
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, Diego Maradona was a famous soccer player who started to play when he was 13 years old, he could not become the best soccer player in the history because he has been involved on drugs problems.
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, he could not handle the aforementioned situation and he retired before than expected.
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 is a complicated matter,
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, there are many approaches that help us to get a better
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orkplace. By handling our emotions and working on our self-awareness during working time, we can educate our minds to thrive under challenging situations
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 as bossy peers and disrespectful customers, to name a few. By doing
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, our minds will be always prepared
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 whatever events could impact our emotional state.
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 at
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 relies on relationships.
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 on healthy relationships, workers need to cultivate respect and care for their peers and their superiors rather than be always focused on self-interests. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the claim that an early decision on a career path and keep to it leads to a
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more satisfying working
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 because
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 depends on many things which are not under our control. To get
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, persons need to
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 on their emotions and their relationships.
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