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More and more businesses, as well as individuals, are choosing to either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

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 of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is a colossal upsurge in thinking of use technology in the business. There is widespread worry that it will lead to a deluge of problems.
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, I do not entirely accept
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 of my stance. The
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 dominant is that Technology helps Individuals or business to reduce time
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, people
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usiness meeting on
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video
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 of face to face due to COVID 19
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 Apart from
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 benefit more when it comes to being useful, but they can
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 enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with much ease, efficacy, and convenience. All these merits stand
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 in good stead as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence are concerned. Another crucial aspect of the propositions mentioned above is that it is likely
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 help thrive and excel in varied fields.
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, only when
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 follows
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 a system, they can
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 broaden their horizon,
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 essential attributes responsibility, dedication, and perseverance. Television
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ood source of entertainment
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children
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 to play games as well as watch movies which helps to make
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 life more enjoyable.
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 to use technology in daily
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lifestyle
. In conclusion, after pondering over a great deal of thought and deliberation it is crystal clear that the benefits of
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 notion are indeed too great to ignore.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Efficiency
  • Convenience
  • Instant messaging
  • Video calls
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Economical
  • Accessibility
  • Physical barriers
  • Nuanced understanding
  • Impersonal
  • Misunderstandings
  • Reliance
  • Technical failures
  • Vulnerable
  • Security breaches
  • Hacking
  • Data theft
  • Sensitive information
  • Digital communication
  • Face-to-face interactions
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