Many scientific institutes conduct research on live animals. Some people regard it as cruel and unnecessary while others believe it is justified in the interest of human welfare. Discuss the two views and give your reasons. Give reason for your answer.

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Today we are living in
such
scientific era where
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we have conquered over many deadly diseases ,
this
could have been possible only because of many trials and research which have been performed at a different level over live animals. Some people thought that doing an
experiment
on the animal is doing cruelty over them whereas some thoughts its good to save the human race. In
this
essay, we will discuss both of these views. In medical science we have come in
such
a position where any disease can be cured if proper medicinal or surgical management will be provided to a needy person on time
this
could have been achieved only by research work and trials over an animal ,generally, guinea pigs are used for
this
purpose so that toxicity and benefits of medicinal effects can be studied well,
instead
of putting a human being in the endangered situation .Some people think it is cruelty over animal because many a time
experiment
animal does die and faced many bad side effects so it is not justified on the animal side. Today we have invented
such
effective and advantageous drugs which can save patients from cancer and other diseases
this
could have been able to get only because of research on drugs and experimental trials on animal
otherwise
we could not have been discovered them and now we are saving millions of patients by that drugs
although
to achieve
this
success we have sacrificed many animals on which we have performed the
first
experiment
of
this
drugs.By doing
this
animal have gone through pain and discomfort too as it happens most of the time in surgical
experiment
procedure. After observing both the views I think it is not unjustifiable on doing an
experiment
on an animal because after all, we are bringing a new surgical technique and new drugs for our upcoming generations so that they cannot face any trouble and pain due to their disease we can able to give new and modern and less harmful medicines in
this
world.
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