In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in small family units, instead of a large, extended family. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Currently, individuals who live in big cities alone are prone to remote other family members or more willing to choose to live with their children and mates rather than their relatives and parents.
Although
this
phenomenon has a bad influence on our life, I think it is a positive development. Indeed, people with living in big cities are
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about living alone or together with mate, unlike people who born in the past. They want to more
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space to do what they want to do without considering the feelings from other relatives and parents
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and don't want to spend too much
time
on taking care of the elderly and cleaning the
home
because they do not hope to be blamed and supervised by their elders.
For example
, when people live with their parents, they do what they think is fun at
home
, but their parents see their
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as ridiculous and unreasonable
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and
then
criticize them, which means that anything you do at
home
will be exposed to them. Once your
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do not cater
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them
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xpectation, you will be criticized
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your elder. No one wants to come
home
every day and be bound by elders.
Therefore
, they choose to avoid living with their elders.
However
, its existence still poses a threat
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people. If we live ln extend family, the elders can provide reasonable advice and help when we confront difficulties.
For instance
, an adult who
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in
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partment alone fell sick. He
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that he will miss the best
time
for treatment and there is no one looking after himself, which means that he needs to spend money to employ a nursing worker taking care self, but if we live in a big family, the extra family member around us like parents, can take care of us in
time
.
Consequently
, living a
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family is so essential, when people get into trouble. In conclusion, People prefer to be able to live freely without supervision and restriction from their families, but when we face difficulties alone, the extra family members can always give us the greatest help in
time
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