In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in small family units, instead of a large, extended family. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Currently, individuals who live in big cities alone are prone to remote other family members or more willing to choose to live with their children and mates rather than their relatives and parents.
Although
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this
phenomenon has a bad influence on our life, I think it is a positive development.
Indeed, people with living in big cities are Linking Words
passion
about living alone or together with mate, unlike people who born in the past. They want to more Replace the word
passionate
privacy
space to do what they want to do without considering the feelings from other relatives and parentsReplace the word
private
,
and don't want to spend too much Remove the comma
apply
time
on taking care of the elderly and cleaning the Use synonyms
home
because they do not hope to be blamed and supervised by their elders.Use synonyms
For example
, when people live with their parents, they do what they think is fun at Linking Words
home
, but their parents see their Use synonyms
behavior
as ridiculous and unreasonableChange the spelling
behaviour
,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
criticize them, which means that anything you do at Linking Words
home
will be exposed to them. Once your Use synonyms
behaviors
do not cater Change the spelling
behaviours
for
them Verify preposition usage
to
e
xpectation, you will be criticized Add an article
an
from
your elder. No one wants to come Verify preposition usage
by
home
every day and be bound by elders. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they choose to avoid living with their elders.
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However
, its existence still poses a threat Linking Words
on
people. If we live ln extend family, the elders can provide reasonable advice and help when we confront difficulties. Verify preposition usage
to
For instance
, an adult who Linking Words
live
in Change the verb form
lives
a
partment alone fell sick. He Add an article
an
fells
that he will miss the best Correct your spelling
feels
time
for treatment and there is no one looking after himself, which means that he needs to spend money to employ a nursing worker taking care self, but if we live in a big family, the extra family member around us like parents, can take care of us in Use synonyms
time
. Use synonyms
Consequently
, living a Linking Words
extend
family is so essential, when people get into trouble.
In conclusion, People prefer to be able to live freely without supervision and restriction from their families, but when we face difficulties alone, the extra family members can always give us the greatest help in Change the form of the verb
extended
time
.Use synonyms
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