You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Jay Hope you're doing good. I understand you are in a deep state of dilemma and want my opinion over whether to take up a start your working life or continue with your studies. My suggestion is to opt for a . Knowing you since childhood, I have always seen you doing things practically rather than following the theory. Doing a job enable you to have an insight into how things actually work in a
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scenario. Being a curious person, sitting in a classroom again is something you may not like. Working at
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stage of life would benefit you immensely as it will allow you to break your comfort zone. Not only
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be turned into a disciplined individual due to the demand of a competitive workplace.
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academic prowess has an instrumental role in shaping one's career, I still believe jumping onto a workplace is rather a better choice in your case. Now, the sector you should go
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is certainly marketing. As you have extremely engaging
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skills,
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domain is meant specially for people like you. I am quite sure that
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role of marketing head or even a field agent would help you to excel in your professional career. I hope with my guidance, you are now clear about what to do
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. Best wishes Sonam
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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