Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soons as they become adults while other say children should stay at their parents house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Recently, it has been a controversially

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debate about whether children should reside in their parent’s households or move out to settle on

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ndependent life as an adult. In my own perspective, I argued the

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idea to be not only logical

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but

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righteous for numerical reasons. The

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and foremost merit of living on one’s own is the adaptability. To be more specific, thoroughly acknowledged can be social skills

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as communicating, problem-solving, discussing and negotiating abilities which will indubitably contribute to assist the young

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career development and make them identical to others at the same age. Another point to be considered is the attainment of independence sense. While being let to be natural, children would gradually form and shape the attitude, postures together with gestures to become familiar with adulthood.

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ignore the childlike, substantially being straightforward and affirmative.

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stance, the young birds ought to be close to the nest with wholehearted care and support. Albeit

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though is not totally erroneous, the fact that youngster will possibly get more childish and feel more underestimated if too

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emotional activities are

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cuddled by parents. Without proper self-taught independence. Only a limited horizon at knowledge is youngsters facilitated with widely budget could ultimately avoid and yield the monetary temptation to lessen the possibility of committing crimes. To conclusion, supplementing children with a small budget can transparently elevate the cognition awareness of children together with insuring with

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at education.