Some people say that too much time and resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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some opine that a large number of resources are consumed to the preservation of wild creatures and birds. In my own’s perspective, I partially disagree with

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paper is going to cast the light on my views and draw a reasonable conclusion. On the one side, the act of investing in conservative wild animals is essential in maintaining the

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cosystem. The fact that people have been raised their awareness about the harsh consequence of the loss biodiversity, which is

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to neglect or cross out

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because it is not

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nly impact directly to their daily life, but

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to their following generation.

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in developed and developing countries

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the reduction in various animal species, which

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a crucial role in remain a sustainable food-chain of sea creatures and wildlife. Thereby, it is obligate that people should pay more attention as far as

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draw some immediate action and tactics are concerned that will

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effectively a mutual habitat with wild beings. On the other side, the inconsistent

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ction of some people who unstable at their attitudes or their investments on environmental issues raise the

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of many advocators about the effectiveness and

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of these investments.

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, whilst many young and wild mammals

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of control in natural habitat, many philanthropists are still minimum and limited their

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in some determined campaign like propaganda widely about the result of over-poaching wild animals.

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are operated in a nick of time and easier to halt after they have received enough

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or charitable in public.

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the transparency of

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group in terms of finance. To sum up, despite the fact that people obvious seen the necessity of conservation wild animals, the investors and advocators should

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constantly to the act of remaining and reserving natural creatures and animals. It is a sustainable foundation

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the survival of humanity.