In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?

There is an urgent concern among parents that children are engaged in paid jobs. Some people think that children should enjoy their childhood

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a normal kid while others believe that a job experience can

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practical merits. In my view, I completely agree with the

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point. It is necessary to know how to manage

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and learn all the responsibilities about it. Children should spend their time playing games and developing their social skills rather than being engaged in paid work

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as retail assistant, social media influencers, or jobs related to the construction industry.

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, if children spend their time working, they do not be able to attend their school obligations which could

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dramatically their learning process and

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impact their growth. Many children workers experience sleep disorders and short- span attention, these effects could

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several dreadful consequences in the children's lives.

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, Many specialists claim that when children are involved in paid activities, they can learn about how to manage their

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. Nowadays, many young adults are dealing with financial problems due to lack of economic education in school. For

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reason, it is crucial that children can acquire a healthy relationship with

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, Australian schools foster their student to looking early jobs opportunities in safe areas by doing simple tasks

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as attending customer, packaging, and cleaning tasks in order to teach students values and life lessons.

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initiative, parents can notice that their sons are more aware

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the expenditures and have more savings. In conclusion, children must have a normal childhood, attending a school and spending time with friends.

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, in order to ensure a future healthy relationship with

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, parents and schools have to foster pre-teens and teenagers to experience how is

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real life.