Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music will still have a place in today`s modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

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mankind has always been accepted as a prominent one. In my opinion, taking into consideration the consequences

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as increased rates of mental health, creativity and higher moral standards within society, I totally agree with the idea which supports the existence of

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in the modern digitalized world. Since it may have a great impact on the upbringing process of children, 2) a lot of various learning activities related to

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should not only be included but

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expanded in the school programs. The

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seem to keep, even increase the rates of their necessity despite the intensive digitalization all around the globe.

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, their impact on mental health seems to be priceless, as both of them keep nurturing the approaches of people for their own values.

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, recent researches proved that the creativity level can be affected by even

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, especially classical

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occurs to have

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on the feelings and comprehensiveness. Eventually, the moral standards of different society members, regardless of their ages and social status, can be upgraded by engaging them to some activities

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as visiting exhibitions or museums, going to the concerts and watching live performances at the theatres. Engaging school children with several types of integrated activities related to

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can be considered as a wonderful way of helping their development process as a human being and

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can be achieved by spending more time on it. Interestingly, attending different lectures about prominent artists, poets, composers, singers and getting information related with their masterpieces, preparing presentations with

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analyses of various paintings, sculptures or some pieces of

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may end up with some invaluable results. These consequences can be increased rates of their interests in the field, plunged motivation for

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, politeness and being keen on etiquette rules. In conclusion, being fundamental elements of all communities

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seem to keep their importance rates and the managerial staffs of schools need to be aware of the necessary impact of it on children. By

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we, as human beings, can keep the adequate balance in communication and relationship with others.