Students should choose a university that prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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areer path, whether to choose a profession with a lot of financial

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or to go for a sector where

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’s interest resides. Some advocates that undergraduates should choose a field with high cash return,

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, I strongly disagree

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essay will outline why. The prime factor to choose a profession should

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on what each

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and what they are passionate about. Even though some sectors look lucrative and pay fat salaries, it can become boring and

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monotonous

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doesn’t enjoy what he

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spends a significant amount of time at work than any other place, if work does not

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him/her it will lead to frustration and other issues. Numerous studies have consistently found that those who have

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excelled

in their

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are the ones who worked for what they strongly believed & passionate about.

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high-paying

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plans

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tempting, in long term success resides with the

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passion and interest over cash.

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is another reason why

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should

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avoid

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specific field. In

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ecent era where everything can change so quickly, demand for that field might reduce or not exist once an Individual graduates from high-paying

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.

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, Thousands graduated in 2002 with major in computer language “C+”,

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, by that time new computer language

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invented and knowledge of “C+” computer

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language

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obsolete.

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, over-supply is another aspect that may ruin the plan of choosing a

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which ends up making a lot of money. It may happen that numerous undergrad

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ame stream of education and enters the market at

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similar time which may create high competition within them. To recapitulate, It’s safe to assume that choosing a

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should not be based on only monetary rewards as it has many pitfalls. I believe that personal interest and desire should play a key role over money in choosing

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right

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path.