Students should choose a university that prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Numerous factors play a role in
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election of
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areer path, whether to choose a profession with a lot of financial
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or to go for a sector where
one
’s interest resides. Some advocates that undergraduates should choose a field with high cash return,
however
, I strongly disagree
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that belief and
this
essay will outline why. The prime factor to choose a profession should
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on what each
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and what they are passionate about. Even though some sectors look lucrative and pay fat salaries, it can become boring and
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monotonous
if
one
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.
One
spends a significant amount of time at work than any other place, if work does not
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him/her it will lead to frustration and other issues. Numerous studies have consistently found that those who have
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excelled
in their
career
are the ones who worked for what they strongly believed & passionate about.
Although
high-paying
career
plans
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tempting, in long term success resides with the
one
who
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passion and interest over cash.
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Uncertainty
is another reason why
one
should
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avoid
concentrating on
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specific field. In
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ecent era where everything can change so quickly, demand for that field might reduce or not exist once an Individual graduates from high-paying
career
.
For Instance
, Thousands graduated in 2002 with major in computer language “C+”,
however
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invented and knowledge of “C+” computer
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language
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obsolete.
Furthermore
, over-supply is another aspect that may ruin the plan of choosing a
career
which ends up making a lot of money. It may happen that numerous undergrad
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ame stream of education and enters the market at
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similar time which may create high competition within them. To recapitulate, It’s safe to assume that choosing a
career
should not be based on only monetary rewards as it has many pitfalls. I believe that personal interest and desire should play a key role over money in choosing
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right
career
path.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • university major
  • high paying careers
  • long-term satisfaction
  • fulfillment
  • factors
  • potential
  • income
  • passion
  • interest
  • success
  • job satisfaction
  • transferable skills
  • balance
  • personal interests
  • financial stability
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