There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter •    describe what the problems are •    explain how these problems are affecting you •    suggest what you would like the company to do

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email regarding some issues that I experienced with your

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services in the

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couple

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. The problems are reliability and cleanliness.

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, I would like to report the dependability of your services, especially punctuality. Your buses do not reliably arrive on time causing me to be late for work

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Friday.

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I had waited there for almost 15 minutes, the

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did not come.

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inconvenience brings about enormous confusion as I hardly know when I need to be ready for the

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.

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, the

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floor is so dirty. Coffee cups and napkins are all over the place, particularly I saw them on the

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seats.

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results in me in

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looking for a seat, so I had to stand through the way home. I do hope that all the problems mentioned above could bring your attention in terms of making some improvements as these are not tricky to handle. There are some suggestions for these issues. Speaking of the unreliable

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service, you should apply technology for your services. By showing the

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location on tablet or phone devices, customers like me can estimate the time it will arrive at. For the dirty floor, I think you should have more regular cleaning. Staff,

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, will clean the

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everyday

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.

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that, you can impose fines for someone who violates the rules on the

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. Please feel free to contact me if you need any

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clarification. Best regards, Quang