Government should make laws about people's nutrition and food choice. Other argue that is their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a heated debate about whether the government should

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state regulations concerning

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regarding nutrition and food to improve healthier living or it is the freedom of choices of citizens/

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is the rights of people to choose what they want and how they prefer

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their life. In my own perspective, people have the rights to pick up and tasting

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they want, but in the limitation of legislation.

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atter. On the one side, in terms of science, many minor and severe diseases as cardiovascular or massive heart attack are related closely with the consumption of harmful and contaminated foods like processed or junk foods in a long run.

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, enacting the regulations and terms according to the detrimental substances in foods as far as restrict them are

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rogressive concern of many nations.

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, many Western countries

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restricted and impose a large tax on high contain-sugar foods. The fact that consumer not only less consuming

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kind foods

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try to find a better choice with more affordable,

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of the old ones. On the flip side, the opinion that individuals should be responsible and liable

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manage their health conditions and

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and achieved the goals of

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down adverse consequences of unhealthy eating habit and lack of

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are not only require the affirmative of ministry and administration

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need the consistent and affirmative of citizens. If people raise their awareness thoroughly following and watching health-related news, it could be good sources of information to gain their knowledge and broaden their horizon about health problems in connection with wrongfully eating habit and how to ease the detrimental impact of it.

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who highly potential suffer from severe illness will be restrained at

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inimum. In conclusion, I strongly reaffirmed my view that people can be freely purchased and consumed anything they want to taste and drink under the barriers of law,

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, they should be careful consideration about the harsh consequences of uncontrollable eating habit to their health condition