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Some people think that the most important function of music is to help people relax. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is sometimes said that
music
 serves primarily as a means of relaxation. Personally, I mostly disagree, because I opine that not only can
music
 contribute to people ‘relaxing but
also
 it is
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 effective tool of the medical treatment and human daily performance. It is irrefutable, that
music
 has
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eneficial impact on people’ physical and emotional health.
In particular
,
music
 usually is used as
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ealing therapy in many cultures. Having listened
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melodies with special tempos, rhythms and vigorous lyrics, human blood pressure, level of hormones can be normalized and
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mmune system can be stimulated.
In addition
,
music
 impacts on
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ndividual psychological condition, by reducing
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mount of stress and anxiety. Studies have shown that listening to
music
 regularly can ease the burdens that modern life places on mental health.
This
 is the reason why workers, students and parents gravitate toward
music
, using it as
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herapeutic instrument. Another point to consider is that
music
 is known to affect
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people’
mind
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 abilities.
This
 is due to the fact that
music
 can activate brain areas which are responsible for mental focus, attention and creativity. To illustrate, the right suitable
music
 leads to better performance of the employees, by enhancing their aptitudes and stimulate their innovative thinking.
As a result
,
music
 can motivate people to better engage in their jobs and studies, enables them to be as a duck to water and makes
this
 process fascinating and interesting. In conclusion, I am convinced that
besides
 relaxation, listening to
music
 is the key to generate energy for the implementation of our daily routine, work tasks, and improve our physical and mental health.
Submitted by Nataliia Litovchenko on

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