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People born today can expect to live longer than people in previous generations. What are some of the positive and negative implications of this phenomenon? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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It is stated that young people these days are able to be expected to have a longer lifespan than their
ancesters
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ancestors
. There are some positive and negative impacts of
this
 kind of notion relating to the life perspective
such
 as
the
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technology development and the world population. Regarding
to
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the
sufficent
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sufficient
 effect of
this
 life expectancy, it is bearable to realize that people are living in the age of the modern world.
In other words
, by advancing technology, our quality of
live
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are
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 gradually being enhanced.
Therefore
, people are more and more likely to expect to live longer due to the aid of high-tech devices to reduce risks of death
such
 as the emerge of the
autodrive
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auto drive
 mode for vehicles and auto
recorgnize
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recognize
 obstacles during the traffic.
Nevertheless
,
this
 phenomenon could
also
 contain a significant negative influence on the population in each country, to be clear, when the young generations have the advantage to increase their life, it means they perhaps have more
opportunites
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opportunities
 to conduct great things which their previous generations had missed out.
This
 is
such
 a paradox for those young generations because they might have to invest more time on working,
thus
, apparently more reckless to concerned about creating family, and more importantly, reproducing their
next
 generations.
Hence
, that could be the
protential
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potential
 problem when expecting to live longer. In conclusion, albeit encouraging to
develope
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develop
 the world to be
mroe
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more
 modern is
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positive for
this
 expectation, harming to the human population is
also
 considered as its contrast aspect.
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