People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays the
consumption
of soft drinks is rapidly increasing among customers.
This
is the consequence of the advertisements by companies dealing in
such
products. But we know that due to the high level of sugar in them, increasing
consumption
of soft drinks is badly affecting the
health
of people.
However
, there are many measures required to be taken to tackle the issue and in
this
essay, we will talk about all of these.
Firstly
, lifestyle change is an important factor causing
this
addiction to unhealthy food products. Lifestylelifestyle choices and consumerist culture attract people to unhealthy and quick foods.
Furthermore
, the endorsement of these drinks by celebrities influence common people at large scale to make them a desirable part of
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ifestyle.
Furthermore
, the lack of information about the ingredient in sugar-based drinks and their potential harms
also
add to the problem and people don't think much before opting to these products. Actually, eating out and consuming soft drinks along with meals is quite an ordinary thing nowadays and
consequently
, people are suffering from diabetes, blood pressure and obesity.
Although
many families prioritise
health
over taste
but
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oungster is getting caught in the trap of unhealthy
consumption
of soft drinks along with other fast foods. But I think many steps can be taken to prevent people from using all these stuff at less scale.
Firstly
, public
health
education programme should be implemented and made compulsory for all people. In fact, it can certainly change the outlook of people towards their lifestyle choices and food habits, and they may opt for better products
instead
of unhealthy drinks.
Secondly
, government interference is much needed in
such
instances as they can control
such
companies by imposing high tax rates and license amount.
In addition
, it should be made mandatory for all
such
companies to put a label, describing details of sugar content used, on the product. To conclude,
although
there are many problems there are solutions too. If we take precautionary measures for
health
and think critically about our body and wellness, we will definitely stop or at least minimise the
consumption
of sugar-based foods and beverages. Good food is important for individual
health
as well as for public
health
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