The position of women in the society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arises from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

From the past until the

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century, the vast majority of women stayed at home to look after their children and only a very small percentage of them had to

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or do any outdoor activity in many countries.

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,

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custom had changed in the

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20 years and many women now go to

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, run their shops or businesses or even

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as managers in some multinational companies. Of course,

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significant change has had good and bad impacts on everyday life. From my point of view, the disadvantages of

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trend surpass the advantages it offers. Actually,

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issue has to be discussed delicately. When the mother leaves her house, she has two choices: the

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is to leave her house and children without

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, and that of course is unacceptable. The other choice, and it's not better than the

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one, is to get someone to looks after her children and do the housework. There are some reasons that may lead women to

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, but the main reason is that: most married women who are employed or have their own business, need money to live an acceptable life. In my opinion,

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is the husbands' responsibility and they shouldn't involve their wives in the task because

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eventually leads to tragic consequences. Their children don’t get enough

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and time with parents and that lead in the long term disorder in the society. From the psychological point of view, if the children don’t get enough

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during the childhood, they may not be able to interact properly with people around them. Some people claim that "preventing women from

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and not letting them earning money is a type of injustice "; but I don't think so. When a mother prevents her child from getting her

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and affections,

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is the injustice.