As global trade increases, many good, even some daily goods, are exported to another country, which includes long-distance transport during shipping. Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks?

Nowadyas
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Nowadays
, international
commerace
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commerce
are common as import goods are favourable to consumers.
Although
long-distance logistic may cause more carbon footprint,
such
kind of trading
provide
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higher freedom of choice to buyers and
thus
the advantages are able to offset its negative effects. Regarding the benefits of global trade,
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ide range of worldwide products are accessible to citizens. Businessmen may import some goods with low price, high quality and even unique in
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pecific country, which
mean
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buyers can shop anything base on their preferences in
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ocal market easily.
For example
, eggs in Japan are classified as top standard from other countries’ production whereas
vegatable
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vegetable
in Taiwan and Australia usually plant without any chemicals.
Therefore
, global trade can
satisifed
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satisfy
satisfied
consumers’ needs of purchasing
high quality
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agricultual
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agricultural
products. In order to save money, those who
pursuit
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the cheapest options can
also
choose daily goods which are produced in developing countries’ factories like
China
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and
thailand
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.
However
, it is undeniable that global trade includes long-distance transport and even cause harm to the
envrionment
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environment
by the carbon footprint
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caused. Since
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hipping process must require energy use, some
critism
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criticism
may argue
this
kind of trading is not environment friendly. For
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nstant, plant-based meat is a trendy vegan
products
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in Hong Kong, yet most of the sources are imported from Europe and the US at
this
moment.
Thus
there
are
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a
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ongoing debate from green organizations that hardly can carbon footprint be
elimated
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eliminated
,
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since it is just a shift from rasing
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to frozen logistic. In conclusion, international
commerace
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commerce
come along with high freedom of consumption to city dwellers as different goods with competitive advantages are reachable to them.
Although
long-distance transport is
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harm involved,
this
problem can be settled if people choose to import some products from a nearby city so that its benefits may outweigh the drawbacks.
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