As global trade increases, many good, even some daily goods, are exported to another country, which includes long-distance transport during shipping. Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks?
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Nowadays
commerace
are common as import goods are favourable to consumers. Correct your spelling
commerce
Although
long-distance logistic may cause more carbon footprint, such
kind of trading provide
higher freedom of choice to buyers and Change the verb form
provides
thus
the advantages are able to offset its negative effects.
Regarding the benefits of global trade, w
ide range of worldwide products are accessible to citizens. Businessmen may import some goods with low price, high quality and even unique in Add an article
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means
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ocal market easily. Add an article
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For example
, eggs in Japan are classified as top standard from other countries’ production whereas vegatable
in Taiwan and Australia usually plant without any chemicals. Correct your spelling
vegetable
Therefore
, global trade can satisifed
consumers’ needs of purchasing Correct your spelling
satisfy
satisfied
high quality
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high-quality
agricultual
products. In order to save money, those who Correct your spelling
agricultural
pursuit
the cheapest options can Replace the word
pursue
also
choose daily goods which are produced in developing countries’ factories like China
and Correct your spelling
china
thailand
.
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Thailand
However
, it is undeniable that global trade includes long-distance transport and even cause harm to the envrionment
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environment
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hipping process must require energy use, some Add an article
the
critism
may argue Correct your spelling
criticism
this
kind of trading is not environment friendly. For i
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an
products
in Hong Kong, yet most of the sources are imported from Europe and the US at Change the noun form
product
this
moment. Thus
there are
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a
ongoing debate from green organizations that hardly can carbon footprint be Change the article
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elimated
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eliminated
,
since it is just a shift from rasing Remove the comma
apply
a animals
to frozen logistic.
In conclusion, international Correct the article-noun agreement
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commerace
come along with high freedom of consumption to city dwellers as different goods with competitive advantages are reachable to them. Correct your spelling
commerce
Although
long-distance transport is a
harm involved, Remove the article
apply
this
problem can be settled if people choose to import some products from a nearby city so that its benefits may outweigh the drawbacks.Submitted by winglovhe on
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