Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Competition has been a part or lives since childhood, be it getting high grades or coming

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in a race. While many believe that the act of competing should well

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in children, there are those who think teaching co-operation

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is more beneficial in the future.

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confidence can be increased when one competes, in my view it is more important to learn to work together. In a way, it is understandable when some parents push their children to achieve the highest rank in academics or sports in their class.

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is usually because they want their child to gain confidence and perform well under pressure. They believe that if a child can push through a situation and excel at a younger age, he or she will always rise to the occasion at later stages of life.

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some people focus on instilling the habit of competing in children from a younger age.

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, there are those who teach their children to work mutually with their fellow classmates or friends.

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not only helps them learn to be compassionate but

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allows them to respect others' perspectives. Unlike the olden days, schools have started to avoid a grading system for their students, as they feel the kids get along better and there is no discrimination in class between the very smart and averagely smart students. It is

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factors that play an important role in adulthood and is the primary reason people prefer co-operative

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. We cannot deny we live in a world of constant competition. Even though there are those who stand strong with the view that

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is good for children, in my personal view, it is always those who learn to work with combined effort

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ucceed in life.