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The pie chart reveals, how the
energy
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 is used in houses in Australia. The table depicts, the proportion of
electricity
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 used according to resident's number. Overall, it can be seen that the usage of
electricity
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 increases as the number of occupants increase. More than half the amount of
power
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 being utilized for the heating purpose only. It is important to note that as much as 38% of
energy
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 only utilized for cooling and heating. These activities consume the highest amount of
energy
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.
Also
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, a quarter amount of
power
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 in Australian households only used for water heating, which is the
second
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-highest consumer. Both activities almost consume 63% of
energy
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.
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, other appliances
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 as clothes and dishwashers are being utilized 16% of total
energy
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. Lightning and freezers consume the same per cent of
energy
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. They both share 7% each other. Only 4% of the
power
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 being used by cooking in Australian houses. Stand-by
power
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 utilized 3%. In the case of the table, the usage of
electricity
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 by 6 or more residents is almost twice than 1 person's
electricity
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 consumption. 1 person only uses 5000-6500 KWH against 12000-16000 KWH of 6 and more residents. 2 and 3 occupants
electricity
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 usage is quite gradual than 6 and more. They gradually use 6000-10000 KWH
electricity
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